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My Lord

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Lord I may doubt
You are about
when things don't go my way
but I still need to say

Praise be Your name

and to my shame
only I'm to blame
for forgetting to shout Thy name

God Almighty
King of Heaven and Earth
Praise be your Glory
For now and Evermore!
I'm sorry this doesn't seem very poemy. More like a prayer than anything. I still needed to write it and let others have a chance to read it too.


Please feel free to Critique my work. Any input that can help me write better is greatly appreciated. Thank You!=)
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inhonoredglory's avatar
Oh, that is beautiful and so so true! It's from the heart, and that matters the most.